When you're ready for a second pair of eyes, I'll give your story or novel a careful, probing read. As I do, I'll provide comments on the characters, language, structure, and events of the story. Depending on what stage the work is in, I might ask a lot of questions to help you advance or reconsider character development or story event. I'll also make line edits and suggest ways to strengthen the prose. Depending on what's needed, I'll make both big-picture and small-picture suggestions. I'll give you back a thoroughly marked-up manuscript and a multi-page critique.
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